Short Story
Along time ago there was a beautiful kingdom named Heuejen. It was named after the beloved lake that the city over looked. In Heuejen there was Queen Rosalinda and King Jobnola who over looked and took care of the beloved city. But, there was also Lord Eaxder who wanted to over through the King and Queen to make the city his own and plunge it into darkness for eternity.
Nice! The beginning really drew me in to your story. You might want to finish it though or it should be classified as a story starter.
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I liked your story. What happens? Does he take over?
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